Nice! Your art got better and more consistent. one nit-pick would be that on bottom panel of page 12 I would put some background. a tent or some mountains would fill up the blank space and better place the characters in the camp.

Kneecap scene has induced in me various emotions. So good job doing that.

I don't know why I had hard time keeping up with the story. Maybe I was reading right to left, maybe there was too many characters or just my attention span was too short. Probably just a skill issue on my part.

Couple of weird choices regarding the adaptation. English translation of "princess", in LN Quof translated as just "my lady", and how ferdinand cast the spell in full view.

I kinda like how fake and stiff Rozmyne persona feels. The coldness of nobility is not something I felt as much in the Light Novel.

Also Chekhov stockpiles his heap of guns.

From the crowd I spotted few familiar faces, Ottilie Bonifatus and Rihyarda. The music is using some similar instrument to harspiels but still it's different to the real life counter part of bandura.

I really like Asa had watered her desert and made oasis to welcome others.

"I witnessed you" - it's acknowledgment that asa has stood out but on her own terms this time, and maybe that she reach out.

<Goodbye, Horrible Fiancé, Hello, Fun Magic School Life!> vol 1 - The Protagonist has so much plot armor that plot gave up and stopped trying to throw a spanner in the works. The are no stakes here. Even slice of life has more inconsequential stakes than this novel. I don't recommend it.

On th other hand <Altina the Sword Princess> vol1 is great. Protagonist is a bottom rung officer that is sent to remote fortress to work there, where he meets Titular Princess. The only bit of magic is how she can wield comically large sword. In the oversaturation of isekai it's quite refreshing read. The romantic duo isn't anything new but they are written well enough. I would label this as adventure - romcom and as I like all adventures I like this.

Slippery Okuta-san fun slice of life about squid octopus girl

As I remember, the science of the 7 day lifecycle is handwaved, but the cause of cycle is plot relevant.

In this episode there is no epiphany, a lot of time has passed but the changes are very subtle. I like that it's not explicitly said what epiphany makio's friend had.

Asa has a conflict where she cannot express her internal state in words. as Maikio put it, she lacks vocabulary.